I'm just about an ordinary kid: I've got brothers and sisters; I go to school; I love ice cream, and I don't like homework. Though I don't know what people in Palistine, Israel, and Syria are going through, I can imagine it. I want peace just as much as the next person, and after watching the movie Promises,
I've got a few plans! I know that change is always hard, and some don't like it, but in this case, it is for the better. People should start off by stoping the violence. It can not happen any longer! Then the Israelis soldiers need to move out of the West Bank and the Gaza Strip. This will give Palestinians more freedom! After these have been done, peace is well on its way, and my dream is that by the time our generation is grown up, peace will be achieved, everywhere!
I liked how you start your paragraph about your self. I liked how you have peace, so that there is a positive ending.
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